Zoe's evaluation of Prelim

Here is where we could have framed better, it is to much background behind Ryan and also its a canted angle, which is not the angle we wanted. we could have tightened it up, so there was hardly any background. 

Overall our prelim exercise went well, but there was a few problems, such as framing in the two shot of Becky and Ryan or the 180 degree rule.

I was props, costume and make-up and hair, this went well as the coat had a sense of mystery to the 'shady fellow'.
Also having Ryan wearing black, it shows that he is scared but also that he was nobody and wanted to fit in.
Becky wearing normal clothes makes the audience assume she is just a poser by when she could be more.
Rebekah wearing normal clothes makes her look like a normal college student

I filmed the 180 degree rule unfortunately we broke this. the pictures below will show why-

This is where the 180 degree rule was broken, from here it is no the  left side of bekah instead of the right where it should of been.

From Ryan's pov the camera was on the right side but when it changes to Bekah's pov it was on the left clearly breaking the 180 degree rule.
My hair was tied back to hide personality.

Here is  a diagram clearly labelled, where we broke the 180 degree rule and where Ryan and Becky were placed , camera 2 is where we should have place the camera. 

This is from Ryan's P.O.V where the camera is placed on his right side to give a clear view of Bekah's reaction. 

The hair in this was to show who may of been the bad guy or who was thought to be the bad guy. My hair in this was pulled back, to show that i meant business, Becky had hers down to show that she was just a passer by, Bekah also had hers down, because she was not a major part in the opening. For this no Make up was involved, as it wouldn't have looked right.